Score: 3

"I have a question, this flash wasn't good"

submission: How a Duder Flash is Made

date: July 10, 2007

I think you had better go to the drawing board for this flash, how you made a flash, I could probably have found out on my own. Looking forward to another one of your ideas though.

Heres a question I got though, hentai, is it pernounced, like you said, "hent-eye", I thought it was pernounced "hent-ey".

Thanks for putting your effort into the flash, just put more in next time.

Score: 6

"you need a point, graphics were okay. Longer."

submission: The Bird and the Bishop

date: July 1, 2007

To extend, you need a point, a story, the indication that the parrot is on the Bishops arm (Bishop is a nice character, it's not used much - original), is a bit below the bare minimum that you should have a story, it might make it worth the lack of story if it was funny, but it only made me feel civilized with the parots short, english sounding voice.

The graphics weren't that bad, and if you drew those mountains you should give yourself some props, because if I ever drew a flash, it would definitely be poorly drawn stick figures (or I could be smart and use paint). It also needs to be longer.

I wish you luck on your future flash creations, game, or movie. Some music might go along with the flash as well, that is, not when their talking - though there are some scenes in which such a fit in is possible.

Score: 9

"sound, faster menu, music, maybe story"

submission: EscapeDaHouse 4 Section 1

date: June 30, 2007

I really enjoy these kind of flash games (points and clickers), and that there is some kind of scary thing is a fun add. I think you need some sound, but something I was really bothered by was the slow menu, it pulled up to slow and you couldn't draw it down and use items without the item your trying to use disappearing because it thinks I'm using it with the menu. There could be some creepy music which would enhance the overall experience more, the graphics were good, and I enjoyed them. You could include a story cause I couldn't really figure out what was going on, am I at school? Is there a shooter? hmm but it says reception hall, so nevermind.

I gave you a 4 because I like the game, but I would be joyed if you would add onto this game, then I would complete more of it, even if you just changed the menu problem.

ps: I liked the turn of the light and an invisible ink writing appears, very nice. Not quite sure what the colors show the way means though. I'm gonna go play it again even though I said I would later once you fixed the stuff. I like the time, it's kind of annoying, but it presses you to get the game done.

I look forward to more flashes from you, you should check out Mateusz Skutnik's (google it) point and click games, if you want to play some that aren't your own ;D.

goodjob.