Score: 3

"I have a question, this flash wasn't good"

submission: How a Duder Flash is Made

date: July 10, 2007

I think you had better go to the drawing board for this flash, how you made a flash, I could probably have found out on my own. Looking forward to another one of your ideas though.

Heres a question I got though, hentai, is it pernounced, like you said, "hent-eye", I thought it was pernounced "hent-ey".

Thanks for putting your effort into the flash, just put more in next time.

Score: 6

"you need a point, graphics were okay. Longer."

submission: The Bird and the Bishop

date: July 1, 2007

To extend, you need a point, a story, the indication that the parrot is on the Bishops arm (Bishop is a nice character, it's not used much - original), is a bit below the bare minimum that you should have a story, it might make it worth the lack of story if it was funny, but it only made me feel civilized with the parots short, english sounding voice.

The graphics weren't that bad, and if you drew those mountains you should give yourself some props, because if I ever drew a flash, it would definitely be poorly drawn stick figures (or I could be smart and use paint). It also needs to be longer.

I wish you luck on your future flash creations, game, or movie. Some music might go along with the flash as well, that is, not when their talking - though there are some scenes in which such a fit in is possible.

Score: 9

"sound, faster menu, music, maybe story"

submission: EscapeDaHouse 4 Section 1

date: June 30, 2007

I really enjoy these kind of flash games (points and clickers), and that there is some kind of scary thing is a fun add. I think you need some sound, but something I was really bothered by was the slow menu, it pulled up to slow and you couldn't draw it down and use items without the item your trying to use disappearing because it thinks I'm using it with the menu. There could be some creepy music which would enhance the overall experience more, the graphics were good, and I enjoyed them. You could include a story cause I couldn't really figure out what was going on, am I at school? Is there a shooter? hmm but it says reception hall, so nevermind.

I gave you a 4 because I like the game, but I would be joyed if you would add onto this game, then I would complete more of it, even if you just changed the menu problem.

ps: I liked the turn of the light and an invisible ink writing appears, very nice. Not quite sure what the colors show the way means though. I'm gonna go play it again even though I said I would later once you fixed the stuff. I like the time, it's kind of annoying, but it presses you to get the game done.

I look forward to more flashes from you, you should check out Mateusz Skutnik's (google it) point and click games, if you want to play some that aren't your own ;D.

goodjob.

Score: 5

"Didn't like the cheesyness"

submission: Tuskikage

date: June 27, 2007

Well, it might have been good if the ninja slashed more than once. The hitting on the tree in the end was funny, but it was short, and it was unrealistic, not to mention unentertaining pending to the sword fights, that he didn't mix up the sword tactics, and the stick figures didn't even fight back. Sometimes I like to see realism, even if it may seem cool that he kills with one slice. The blood wasn't pooling, it was scribbling on the ground, and the figures didn't have swords, and yet for some reason decided to charge after him anyway.

It was funny at the end though, the whole George of the Jungle theme, and the sword was kind of cool, I just though it needed to be longer, and more detailed in the killings (not gore, but like, sword movements). you needed sound effects too (unsheathing sword, slice sound, "aughghhg!!!" death sound, jump sound, ect).

Score: 9

"Decent, I like it, but not a full flash."

submission: Ninja Moves

date: June 26, 2007

You have good graphics, you know your flash, and you have sound effects (the unsheathing of the sword would be a cool sound effect), the only problem is it's not a full flash so it probably won't get on newgrounds. But if you made a game, that would be awesome, goodluck on whatever you make.

Score: 5

"There's already been an animation done for this."

submission: TheEvilPlan

date: June 26, 2007

I don't think this is worth being on newgrounds because, it wasn't really all yours. I mean, you took the script from the simpsons show and added animation that was not as clean as their animation was, I don't really get the point of remaking something already made, and it might have been better to just have posted the whole simpsons clip on here. Since I havn't seen the episode, it was strange and had no point or humor to me not knowing exactly what was going on.

Though, you did have fairly decent graphics, and I'll prize you for that, I think if you can come up with something a little more original you can do just fine, you already seem to be a very good flashmaker, this flash isn't manifest of your art and flash skills.

Score: 6

"Too simple"

submission: Block Defender v1.0

date: June 23, 2007

You need to make levels, and possibly backgrounds to scroll through while fighting the blocks. The blocks need to be more than one color, with different colors being stronger or weaker, it would be kind of cool if they shot at you, but you would also need a longer screen to make up for the difficulty. You need some music as well, and sound effects would be a minimum for firing, and maybe, not sure how it would turn out, but sound effects when a shot lands on a block might be cool. Refrain from metal or green day music, as this will no doubt get this submission blammed, you might want to stick with some electronic music when making this kind of game. It also might be cool if you got money when you take down ships, color the interface up a bit, and you can spend money on different kind of weapons (rapid-fire, wide burst, rocket whatever, ect), these weapon buying and maybe shield upgrading and health replenishing bonuses would be bought at the end of each level, if I didn't mention it, you could use levels.

Fighting blocks with the arrow keys, it's a creative idea instead of some lame NES drawn rocket figure shooting rocket ships, I like the creativity.

I wish you luck with your flash endeavors - goodluck!

Score: 5

"It might've been better if you drew the background"

submission: GeorgieMustardBiscuits 2

date: June 22, 2007

instead of copying and pasting it, I didn't really get it though, it was like there was no point to the flash. You drew the characters pretty good, but, again, I didn't really find it funny in the randomness, this flash just didn't have the same random funny that others do, probably because those one's start out by making you think there is something to the plot, and it turns out to be something had leaves you laughing saying, "pft, pft, what do that mean???", this just left me saying "what was that :'( ".

Score: 0

"a metallic episode of lame self-glorification."

submission: THE FLY V! POWERUP!

date: June 18, 2007

All this flash seemed to me was some lame graphiced self-glorification. Giving yourself powers may seem cool, but it's a bit egotistical, the death metal made it seem a bit lamer as well. It seemed kind of lame, knowning that you graphiced in lame "ploops" of color that you had some great "struggle" with, while in reality there was nothing there in the beginning. Overall the metal music and the overused small array of "powers", combined with self-glorification is going to be a little to uninteresting to viewers. I'm glad you put in effort into it though.

Score: 6

"not enough individuality from what I played. 1lvl)"

submission: Mighty Maze

date: June 14, 2007

you need to make it clear that once you press start, the pathway appears, and that the start is like the landing pad for the millenium falcon or something. I kept going outside of the start side and I didn't know what the heck was going on. The graphics could be cleaner, but it's a good game, not much different than all the other games from what I could see from level one, but if you were to add like moving objects and electric 'zzz's that would buzz inbetween the back so you'd have to hurry a bit, that would be fun. You know, blocks pounding on the ground intermitently, excetera. More music, (I only played the first lvl, I don't like mouse games, except for that one on armor games.)